Many people in today’s world are still suffering poor sanitation and waste management. What are the causes and effects of this reality?
It is undeniable that nowadays in many countries, the residents are facing a serious sanitation and hygiene crisis. There are some rationales that can be put forward to explain this detrimental phenomenon, and there are severe social and national impacts.
There are two obvious reasons which make it difficult to live in a hygienic environment. Firstly, remote rural habitants are not provided with sufficient education to be highly aware of the importance of good sanitation. Although the world has turned into the most advanced era, 2 billion people still do not have basic sanitation facilities such as toilets or latrines according to the World Health Organization. Secondly, there is a common perception that just a little action does not cause big trouble. Because many people are so opinionated that they still bear in mind this unethical notion, they could not stop their wrongdoings until it becomes a global catastrophe.
The consequences for society and national security will be inevitable if people keep underestimating the importance of sanitation and hygiene. From the perspective of society, public health will negatively be affected. Good sanitation and waste management is the first to-do to live a healthy life, otherwise it will lead to the outbreak of a number of epidemics such as cholera and typhoid. In terms of national security, it reduces human’s well-being, social and economic development due to impacts such as anxiety, risk of sexual assault, and lost educational opportunities.
All in all, some reasons can be identified for poor management of waste and the serious effects on society and national security must not be underestimated. Therefore, we need to take actions together to minimize those negative impacts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36823104693 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03055637104 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617328519856 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2538393705 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.384615385 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212038894435 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573430253479 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543349557513 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110375136451 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355056547052 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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