Nowadays, there are numerous places the role of both father and mother alternative and in my opinion that it has remaine positive and negative improvement i will discuss share my view and supporting example in following paragraphs.
First of all, it is essential the role of both same father and mother in many places as they do love their children in every days because they disire our children respect elder people and they can successful in their line but according to me both gender change our behaviour and role immediately related various things. To illustrate, if they go to any places and they take decision for changes our life style and finally they always change role play in human life.
On the flip side, first and foremost reason behind the negative development as we always thought ,many people go out for any work spend holidays tour and after that, his family do not talk for few days and they could face problems for few times for instance, according to recently survey, many tourist go out many work and for enjoy with friends finally they do received negative news related changing their role.
In conclusion, although there are several masses change our behaviour according to time and places and they follow this life style that it is extremely harmful effects in the future and social systems.
Why i got 5 score can you
Why i got 5 score can you tell me
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Did you mean 'essentially'?
Suggestion: essentially
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...egative development as we always thought ,many people go out for any work spend ho...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun work seems to be countable; consider using: 'many works'.
Suggestion: many works
...to recently survey, many tourist go out many work and for enjoy with friends finally they...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89333333333 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36101673014 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582222222222 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.2558221013 49.4020404114 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 220.2 106.682146367 206% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.0 20.7667163134 217% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.0 7.06120827912 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221076562538 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117578594452 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649184758038 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129312362929 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062191544704 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.1 13.0946893788 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 11.3001002004 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.97 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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