It is argued that technology things very helpful for everyone every work as computer, laptops and telephones because they can study and work in the home from their electronic device. I will discuss both merit and demerit in the following paragraphs.
To commence with, it is very important for mobile phones in individual life because they can various work from phones, compurer, laptops as this thing already have their home so it is extremely beneficial for everyone for instance, many people think that these things very helpful every work as study, agriculture, and etcetera. Moreover, in working home very benefits like time save, money save consequently most masses like and intrest work in home.
On the other hand, first disadvantage of work in home because they can not communication each other or they can not met their friends and relatives so it has negative impact on both male and female. For example, I think a lot of work depends on the technology device as mobile phones like food order and delivery and so on.
In conclusion, there is no doubt, it is possible do work at the home and they can face positive and negative problems in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 199.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86432160804 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54491731224 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56783919598 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.7961753427 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.285714286 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4285714286 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.7142857143 7.06120827912 237% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364034873504 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164779660078 0.084324248473 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906520145723 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22714759616 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554566521375 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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