Many people these days have computer, laptops, telephones at their home for work. Do you think, working from home has more advantages or disadvantages? Give reasons.

Essay topics:

Many people these days have computer, laptops, telephones at their home for work. Do you think, working from home has more advantages or disadvantages? Give reasons.

there is no doubt that education and learning process has evolved over the years and computers have made it easier. Although search of information has become more convenient, the have still not become substitute of human interaction and emotions. In my opinion, what can be changed is the method of teaching but computers will not lead to disappearance of professors.

Nobody can argue that acquisition of data has been simpler than earlier days and knowledge sharing is fun we all new gadgets available around. Youngsters are now more keen to use computers to have more details of the subject via computers and similar gadgets. now a days even universities are making available e-books, e-libraries free WIFI for development of education among students which was otherwise not available for older generations.

but besides developing complexities due to artificial intelligence the need for human interaction to operate these resources and to explain the resources cannot be denied, atleast in foreseeable future. human intervention in explanation of critical subjects like Medical, engineering is vital and chances of this being replaced is when pigs have wings. there is the necessity of humans to understand each individuals learning ability and determine their specific needs. how will artificial intelligence replace this?

In conclusion I would like to reiterate that, tutors will continue to play pivotal role in imparting knowledge no matter how complex and adaptive a computer become. The method of teaching may change due to computers but replacing educators with computer is highly improbable.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, may, so, still, in conclusion, no doubt, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4859437751 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97599845927 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638554216867 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2305687754 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.833333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0804149887199 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0276984854103 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0243532377431 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0447204862705 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306039451296 0.056905535591 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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