Many species of animals all around the world are on the verge of extinction. Some say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say that we should concentrate more on the problems of human beings. Discuss both viewpoints and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Most of the species of animals around the globe are on the verge of extinction.Some people say that the countries and the folks should protect the animals . In contrast to it, others say we as a individual should pay more concentration on the issues of human beings.Here, in this passage lets discuss about the both the viewpoints.
It is true that the countries and the folks should protect the animals because once the animals are died, we can't bring them back to life. Our future generation may not be able to see them.The people need to research about the reasons why are the animals becoming extinct. Later, we can find the solution to it and can solve as soon as possible.LThere are few contries which impose fines on killing the animals as well, but still people kill them. Let us take an example of Dodo bird. It has become an extinct bird as of now. Many years from now, we could see this bird but now we are unable to find it around us. It is assumed that it became extinct because of some disease among the flock of Dodo.At that time , the humans were not equipped with the technology to find out the accurate reason behind it. After the extinction of any animal, it's highly impossible to get them back to life. We don't have time machine with us. So,we as a individual need to take care the animals around us.
In contrast to it, others say that we need to concentrate more on the problems of humans. To some extend I agree with this opinion because the humans are very selfish living being on this planet earth. He can do anything to get his work done.To make this more crystal clear let's take an example to articulate this. Nowadays, there is an extinction of one horned rihinos in India. These herd was found in eastern parts of India speacially in Assam. But, they are becoming extinct becuase of humans. The humans are behind their horns. The horn of rihinos is quite useful in many ways. It is used in making the swords,medicines etc. This makes the one-horned rihinos to become extinct. The humans kill these rihinos in order to get the horns from them. There are several other examples where humans kill animals like elephants to get horns,tiger for their skins etc.There should be a limit where humans should stop killing the animals for their personal purposes.
At the end, I would conclude that each and every person is responsible for protecting the animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, well, in contrast, in contrast to, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1958.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 426.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59624413146 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42139054084 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511737089202 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.4686573108 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.32 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.04 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.4128256513 381% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380180686994 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895605451028 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.092337477638 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229928070833 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.157274290282 0.056905535591 276% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.