Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience. Do you think this is a good idea or a waste of time?
When students get to the age of going to university, there are two possible options: some will decide to start their first year at the school immediately and the rest will begin to work or plan to travel. In my point of view, the second one is such a waste of time because pupils don’t use their precious time wisely, resulting in them being confused with their preparation when most of their friends already finish it. In this essay, I will give my own opinion on this topic and some reasonable explanations.
Instead of visiting somewhere or working at a store, students should use that time for preparation as it is the most significant step to get ready for university. Since they already give themselves enough time to relax in the summer, so there’s no need to spare more time for yourself. Additionally, they may feel embarrassed if they don’t know how to pack their suitcase or which things to take, etc. Moreover, finding a suitable accommodation can become the biggest problem to them unless they come to the location early. Because of these reasons, getting prepared for everything is the best thing to do than wasting time on meaningless activities.
Besides, students should free some time to learn how to live alone despite of using their free time with friends or working as a novice. The reason for this is their parents always take care of them well resulting in being lack of survival ability. Students who are going to live far away from home need to bear the homesickness and get used to doing household works such as: washing clothes, dishes, etc. As they can’t back home more often because of their study process, they have to get accustomed to doing these things and experience a hard life as a freshman.
In conclusion, it is better to spend your first-year learning at university by being well-prepared and provide yourself with essential tips for daily life than going on vacation or going to work. In the end, it is always you who defines everything so think hard and make a satisfied choice.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75920679887 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59029490898 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563739376771 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.5145745008 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2142857143 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195618024741 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653997381909 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287473077427 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116601696606 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176321992854 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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