Many students take part time jobs while studying in university.do you think it is good idea or bad idea.
It is irrefutable face that, jobs are play important roles in everyone’s life.many students do part time jobs they become self depend. This essay shall discuss views point in my upcoming paragraphs before reaching to logical conclusion.
To commence with, many students are going foreign for higher studies and they do part time jobs when they reach there. Firstly, it is good that they do not depend others.part time jobs make a self depend student .through part time jobs they meet new person everyday. secondly, when students are studying in school they totally depend on parents.Moreover, when students are studying in university they also depend on parents. However, some students are not depend on parents they do part time jobs as well as they can pay fees for studies. For instance, if they do part time jobs for pocket money and fulfill more needs. those student do not part time work. they do not understand value of money. they waste money of their parents. If they do part time then they understand that value of money.according to my opinion part time is a good idea.
On the other hand, enormous undergraduate are studying in university. If freshman do part time when they do studies in university level then they cannot focus on own studies.firstly university studies is very tough.some students are doing part time but they cannot understand studies because they whole day busy.so, they cannot proper focus on studies.Afterthat, many student did not work in school life. Although, part time jobs is necessary because when they do part time jobs.some students take stress and their parents fulfill their needs. but some time they realise that how much difficult make money without work.
To conclude, it necessary that when students are studying in university. They do some part time work. It benefits for career.students should that they do not spoil time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0578778135 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73001904777 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446945337621 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 68.6597668234 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3888888889 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2777777778 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05555555556 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341815541519 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144224530771 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871718486884 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234508526216 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056787589233 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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