Many students take partime job while studying in universities. Do you think it is good idea or bad idea
It is irrefutable fact that learners take partime job because the amount of universities become very high. In the following paragraph, i shall discuss both the positive and negative points in the upcoming paragraph before reaching a logical conclusion.
To commence with, the tertiary education is very high in foreign countries. Therefore, students do partime job to pay own fees. Firstly, by doing partime job juvenilies realise the value o money and they get independence. They are able to fulfill own needs . Moreover, students do more efforts to complete their education. They have no time for other activities. By doing jobs, they make many friends and don’t suffer from any stress.
On the flip side, if a children do only job and they do not take care of our health. The development of their body are not properly. Secondly, they have a burden of studies so they have no time for rest. Some of them are suffer from stress. Nobody is there for guidance. Lastly, sometimes they don’t complete their study by some physical problems like as weakness. Then, they become go under pressure.
To conclude that, i think hard work is good but there should be a limit of partime job for a number of hours. Otherwise, they do not focus on his study.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86046511628 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58725889846 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637209302326 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2744225554 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.0555555556 106.682146367 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.9444444444 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.94444444444 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210006232396 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613971860999 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697659160643 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12898757286 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348526248881 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.02 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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