In many Western countries, there is an increasing number of couples choosing to have no children. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having no children?
Nowadays, it is obvious that there is a phenomenal upsurge in the number of couples who have a choice of having no children especially in western countries. Whereas people can reap plethora of benefits from this, they also have to face up to several potential hardships.
To commence with, being childlessness is definitely able to benefit the couples themselves and the society as a whole. Initially, childfree couples may find it so wonderful to be capable of developing themselves such as pursuing their career and their own interests along with spending more time on self-care. In addition to that, being a happily childfree newly weds also mean that they have no worry about some problems of bringing up a child including financial difficulties, or the way to successfully raise a child in this modern world. Secondly, in respect to the society, a sharp fall in the birth rate definitely can exert a profound impact on the development of the nation in sense that it can make a contribution to diminish the seriousness of overpopulation. As a result, in all likelihood, this will address some social problems including the burdensome pressure on education and medical healthcare together with other public services. Besides, there is probability that this can lead to a significant fall in the crime rates.
Despite the above mentioned benefits, there exist some shortcomings. The large number of childless men and women is considered the main cause of an aging population, which can bring two potential hardships. First and foremost, the issue of the lack of high qualified workforce makes it impossible for these countries to evolve stably and prosperously. Furthermore, another noteworthy point is that the government has to invest a big fund of money on social welfare for the older generation. It is essential for them to provide those retirees or the unemployed with adequate facility and conditions to survive.
To sum up, there is no denying that permanent childlessness can have both positive and negative impact on the spouses themselves and the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, as to, in addition, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16320474777 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0055612119 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593471810089 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3600111579 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.285714286 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18130968637 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587436194037 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114768062236 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135274358141 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120815506692 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.