Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction Do you agree or disagree Provide relevant examples if necessary
In recent years, there has been a growing debate over big salary and job satisfaction. Although it is widely supported that big salary plays a much more crucial role in people’ life than job satisfaction, in my perspective, I totally disagree with this statement. My following essay will clarify the reasons and provide relevant example to justify my point of view. At the outset, a job which can bring fulfillment, contentment regardless of high or low salary is considered the biggest motivation for employees to strive and thrive in their field. When people feel a sense of happiness and pleasure while working, in all likelihood, they will make a bigger attempt to apply themselves in the job, boost their productivity, achieve and accomplish more with the aim of earning satisfaction, happiness in their life. Furthermore, much as they are not offered a high salary, their hard work which stems from job fulfillment is highly likely to become the determinant factor of a significant rise in their salary.
Nevertheless, having a big salary, however lacking job contentedness will definitely exert a negative impact on not only employees’ working productivity but also their personal life, their mental health. Initially, people always feeling stressful, disappointed about their job will probably lack motivation to work, which makes it impossible for them to put all their energy and resources into working, try harder to enhance their skills and knowledge. As a result, this will lead to a decrease in productivity, achievement, affecting the company’s output. Besides, feeling pressured, unmotivated at work can contribute to degrading the quality of their personal life. It is likely that they will feel depressed, exhausted and unhappy after coming home from work.
To conclude, I strongly agree that big salary is not as critical as job satisfaction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... not as critical as job satisfaction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3265993266 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02639478613 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4226187638 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.833333333 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178812007148 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769534972972 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779322407897 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155560392784 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878703558811 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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