Many of the world’s cities are currently facing a serious housing shortage.
What are some of the reasons for this shortage and what solutions can you suggest?
Housing is an essential in bettering people’s lives. However, a steadily increased demand of houses and accommodation are left us an unsolved issue for many cosmopolitan cities around the world. This essay will discuss the fundamental reasons of housing crisis and will explore possible solutions to this.
One of the main reason for housing shortage in this modern world is the population density. In contrast to the bygone days, due to the technological advancement the life span of human being are increased. Likewise, the availability of natural resources for the construction of houses such as land and materials are not increasing. Another cause behind the shortage is people are migrating from rural areas to urban areas in search of job and better life for them and their families. To cite an example, people from India are migrating to Canada, Australia, and the US.
It is clear that, solutions to these issues need to be found. One suggestion is that, the governments should implement some law to restrict the number of child-bearing to control the population explosion. For example, the Chinese government has passed such law and somewhat it is successful. Another suggestion is to create satellite cities. This concept will reduce the number of migrants from rural areas to urban places in search of green pastures. For instance, create parallel cities or towns in rural places with all the advanced facilities for the local people.
To put it in a nutshell, the answer to the urban housing crisis totally relying on the effective planning for the future population growth while addressing the current needs. The above ascribed suggestions are highly recommended to resolve the housing crisis in future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 218, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended resolving'.
Suggestion: recommended resolving
...e above ascribed suggestions are highly recommended to resolve the housing crisis in future.
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Line 7, column 260, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...commended to resolve the housing crisis in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in contrast, such as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23381294964 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82055908337 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564748201439 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0715584285 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9375 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254928128783 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764754548818 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606162964721 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148307006626 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493121846254 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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