The mass media, including TV, radio and newspapers, have great influence in shaping people's ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree this statement? Give reasons for your answer
The media, I firmly believe, play an essential role in every modern society, either in developing countries or developed ones. The question, however, is whether the mass media sources such as Tv, radio and etc directly impact on people’s position or not. Despite popular belief, I am, to a huge extent, an advocate of the former approach.
Granted, media sources, from a practical viewpoint, are the vital means in order to advertising numerous products. Admittedly, these advertisements directly influence people’s perspective by some tricky strategies that they use to persuade people to purchase their products which is not neither useful nor valuable. Further and more importantly, we can mention the exquisite point that people feel that the media as a pastime which not only does provide a vast amount of information but also inform them about global issues and events that occur in faraway countries. Hence, the people’s idea is inspired either positively or negatively by the media. For instance political issues can trigger a heated debate among folks and shape their idea about especial country or warm.
On the other hand, different nations have various culture, nevertheless the media with some images in newspaper or some movies in TV affect their culture and tradition. That is why these days we can clearly see the assimilation between cultures, particularly among youth. As a classification we can point to the world renowned artists or singers such as Michael Jackson who has become a hero for a number of people and alter their attitude, style of clothing and so on.
All things considered, although everyone make a decision with their brain, I wholeheartedly would contend that there are some reasons which show that how much the media has great influence on us, particularly in terms of advertisement, news and programs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24496644295 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90037150343 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654362416107 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8625646588 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.25 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180940619616 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613090926385 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045156928751 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994945959627 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268830751741 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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