The media pay too much attention to the lives and relationships of celebrities such as actors, singers or footballers. They should spend more time reporting the lives of ordinary people.
Nowadays, the large portion of media program are about celebrities such as actors, singers or footballers. Although this kind of programs are popular between people, especially young persons, but I think the main mission of media should be representing and reflecting the public of each society.
The most important thing that should be stick in mind, is the vital role of the media. TV, radio, newspaper and social media can influence people behavior and control their mind. It’s obviously clear that media has an important role to motivate common people in order to attempt to achieve their goals. For example, documentaries that produce base on true story of successful persons’ life, result in encouragement ordinary people to do hard and their best to follow their dreams. Addressing the adventure of famous persons and the difficulties which they passed is more motivated.
Another thing is about the role of media in society as a relation between government and common people. According to this fact, media should place a big emphasis on presentation of public as a largest portion of society. Publishing the problems and challenges, lead to knowing what is happening in the different levels of society which help to making the correct and useful policies.
On the other hand, sometimes publishing and showing the details of celebrities’ life could be destructive. It could be disappointing when people compared themselves to famous persons. For example when young persons compare their body or appearance to their favorite celebrities.
As a conclusion, I think it’s very essential to represent and reflect the public in order to realize the problem and solutions as well. Also, addressing the story of successful persons ultimate to positive effect and encourage people to be hard working and active.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'stuck'?
Suggestion: stuck
...The most important thing that should be stick in mind, is the vital role of the media...
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Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...g emphasis on presentation of public as a largest portion of society. Publishing ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, another thing, for example, i think, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35862068966 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90925784571 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572413793103 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0080124953 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.6 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129271892614 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467087041454 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589717568615 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0705794213239 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663098650769 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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