The media pay too much attention to the lives and relationships of celebrities such as actors, singers are footballers. They should spend more time reporting the lives of ordinary people instead.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays public figure lives are covered on all of the media. Televisions, newspapers, websites and other media pay excessive attention to famous people's personal lives and what they do in their life in order to catch the public's eyes.
Focusing too much on celebrities live by media is not moral and cannot be accepted even, though the majority of the viewers like to watch these reports. Talking and showing more and more about celebrities lives may affect people's way of thinking and might leads to some negative effects on the community. Especially for youth generation. Apart from those, celebrities cannot do normal things like go shopping or meet friends in public easily while they are followed by paparazzi everywhere. Therefore public figures might be embarrassed and tend to be dissociable instead of being with their fans.
On the other hand, if the media focus on ordinary people life, it might have plenty of positive effects on society. Some of these not famous people have a huge impact on society, for example, people who have done Charities or hard-working people are perfect to be covered on the news by showing some documentaries or podcasts to show people how they started from the beginning and have experienced a lot of difficulties, but now are successful and have accomplished their goals. All these examples can increase audiences' or readers' resolution and help them to find their way.
In my opinion, the mission of mass media is not only to concentrate on celebrities lives and reveal their secret by spying their life and habits. they should increase the common knowledge by showing the ordinary and successful people life path. and this is the main purpose of news and social media to make the community more motivated and give them some good knowledge and information that could lead to a more interactive and positive society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...days public figure lives are covered on all of the media. Televisions, newspapers, website...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...y are followed by paparazzi everywhere. Therefore public figures might be embarrassed and...
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Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help them find' instead.
Suggestion: help them find
...ase audiences or readers resolution and help them to find their way. In my opinion, the missi...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...secret by spying their life and habits. they should increase the common knowledge by...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...dinary and successful people life path. and this is the main purpose of news and so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, therefore, while, apart from, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03225806452 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65059237877 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.3365809017 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239277386687 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869290632014 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607366159099 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156729358373 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562369617312 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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