Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat.(Semi-formal Letter)
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter,
Explain the reason for the noise
Apologise for the noise
Describe what action you will take
Dear James,
I am writing in regards to your complain letter that I have got yesterday. Please accept my sincere apologies about the noise and the inconvenience I have caused to you and I will assure you that I will take some steps to make sure this will never happen again.
As you may already now, I had some water leaking problems in my kitchen that forced me to change the plumbings and the kitchen floor. I decided to do it by myself in the evening after my work and I did not realize that my renovation noises disturbing you.
I am sorry again for disturbing you and I am assure you that this will not continue as I hired a professional to finish my kitchen and he will work in daytime. I am really sorry about the problems I made and I hope this will not affect our friendship.
Yours sincerely,
Ehsan Majd
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear James, I am writing in regards to your complain letter that I have got ye...
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Line 7, column 46, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'assured'.
Suggestion: assured
...sorry again for disturbing you and I am assure you that this will not continue as I hi...
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Line 7, column 161, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...my kitchen and he will work in daytime. I am really sorry about the problems I ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 674.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37662337662 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47009436385 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 127.690721649 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564935064935 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 215.1 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.0437725583 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2857142857 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258617232799 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118842701583 0.0766984524023 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712141294932 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163611653129 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108101902964 0.0580467560999 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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