In modern society, it is posible to go shopping, work at communicate via the internet without face-to-face contact with another. To what extent do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Thanks to the development of technology, people can do the variety of things such as purchase products, work or interact with others throughout website easily rather than in the past. From my perspective, I think this development play a vital role in the world.
On the one hand, there are several advantages that can be gained from this technology development. Firstly, since people can buy products at home without going to the stores or shopping malls, this is a quicker and cheaper way to shop. For example, Amazon and eBay are two popular websites that provide a huge number of different products. This allows customers to save time and the costs of traveling. As a result, products will be delivered to their house without any effort.
On the other hand, due to the rapid development of the internet which is an important part of a worker’s life, people can work at home without going to the offices. All the activities are done throughout the internet. For íntance, there are some jobs that you can do such as tutor for English online class, reply messages or email for the company or writer and much more. As a result, it will be more convenient for adults who have marriage and spend more their time with family, giving rise to employment rate.
In conclusion, I believe that people can gain great benefits from this development of the internet.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83829787234 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62596982451 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595744680851 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4061857966 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.75 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173124509719 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618084272911 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041612224988 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109114609892 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185650202996 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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