It is certainly true that , with technological advancement the hard work of human decreased considerably.However ,there are some positive as well as negative impact for this and, I believe the benefits of modern technology outweighs its drawbacks.
Modern technology helped to reduce hard work of human in many ways.In the past, man used to carry bigger stones and other materials in order to build big buildings and monuments . It took decades to finish one project, accidents and deaths during the construction were also high.But now things changed, all the heavy works like stone lifting and mixing concrete are carrying out by machines. Another point is ,after the invention computer the workload of engineers,clerks and accountants decreased significantly and mistakes minimized comparing to the past. Moreover during old days man transported goods in bullock carts and it consumes lot of time and energy, the invention of superfast trains and other vechicles made this job also easier.
On the other hand,modern technology has affected negatively also human life.Firstly, the luxury and sedentary life provided by machines created unhealthy people,The number of obese people soared up.It paves path for serious illness like diabetes mellitus and heart attacks.The mortality rate increased, the life span of human became less.In addition, the unemployment rate increased ten humans work can be done by a computer.This reduced the opportunities of youngsters more people became jobless.Thus ,intense poverty made them criminals
To conclude, its evident that technology contributed positively and negatively to mankind.However, I strongly believe the the benifits outweigh the demerits.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'in addition', 'as well as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.293906810036 0.247107183377 119% => OK
Verbs: 0.161290322581 0.155533422707 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10394265233 0.0946595960268 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0609318996416 0.0501214627716 122% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0286738351254 0.0437548338989 66% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0967741935484 0.122226691241 79% => OK
Participles: 0.0465949820789 0.0403226058552 116% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.17348201216 2.80594681477 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0250896057348 0.0326793684256 77% => OK
Particles: 0.00358422939068 0.00163938923432 219% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0824372759857 0.0861772015684 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00358422939068 0.021408717616 17% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.011925033212 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1701.0 1933.35771543 88% => OK
No of words: 255.0 316.048096192 81% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.67058823529 6.12580529183 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.443137254902 0.374742101984 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.349019607843 0.28420135186 123% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.286274509804 0.203846283523 140% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.2 0.137316102897 146% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17348201216 2.80594681477 113% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.037074148 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682352941176 0.56093040696 122% => OK
Word variations: 83.07719438 60.7387585426 137% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0891783567 37% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 42.5 20.7743622355 205% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 189.217173874 49.517814964 382% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 283.5 127.492653851 222% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.5 20.7743622355 205% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 0.814263465372 266% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 3.99599198397 626% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 77.4019607843 49.1944974215 157% => OK
Elegance: 1.74285714286 1.69124875643 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319193337873 0.332605444948 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.12292556228 0.102741220458 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0272503826834 0.0668466124924 41% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.773762257469 0.534860350844 145% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.196707519611 0.148594505496 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172426568738 0.134430193775 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513580986755 0.0742795772207 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.272368253904 0.324371583561 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.044635730189 0.0638462369009 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206251222624 0.228012699653 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031549745237 0.058150111329 54% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.68436873747 35% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 10.4468937876 57% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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