In the sophisticated era, nowadays, due to the technology is very fast. All people used their work places like businessman, engineer, schools, university and malls so on. There are plethora reason behind it. I will discuss my views in upcoming paragraph.
Modern world is the modern of information and technology. Today, dweller have hectic schedule in their life. They can be time spend in their work place. Hence, person have very obligation, diligent, faithful and honest can be work in their office. Therefore, they have not a time spend in their family and we could not involve in any activities. For instance, dance, sing and outdoor games so on. Furthermore, people can be do the job. They should be puntucal in their work and they have very determinted in their work and rather than today are very tough competition another people.
Nevertheless, we are visit in the same area day by day. Dweller should can be upsurge the weight. In my veiw,they could forget on their fitness and healthy problem. Moreover, person think that exercise do not uncessary in their life and it is affect on the human being life. Otherwise, they do not keep the exercise in the daily rountine rather than they may be get serious diseases in the future time. Last but not the last, they will be face plethora problem in their life. They could be deterimental facts. In my opinion, exercise play an indispenable role in their life. I think any age group essential in their life because life is a golden period human being life
To put it in a put-shell, I pen down saying the fact, in my view point, I think people can enjoy the work in any situation and they can be keep the exercise continue do to the life and they should be keep smile in any day. I think, people can be reduce in the weight and obesity in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for instance, i think, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63664596273 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48930624411 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496894409938 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.3047529067 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8636363636 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6363636364 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77272727273 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123828728167 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409486159521 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398282147781 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877591207487 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220062221816 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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