The flowchart illustrates the production of colored plastic paper clips in a small factory
The flowchart reveals that information of represention the production of colored plastic paper clips in a small factory.
Moving a quick glance on the illustration the produced of coloredThen,
first step is molten plastic.There have a three types of the mould like red mould,blue mould,yellow mould.But
also,blue mould check the quality control machine check for strength and yellow mould check products are select and reject. As well as,yellow have a power there have reject the products in the shops.
Nevertheless,second step in sort by hand choosing the mixed colours and single colours in the malls.
Otherwise, all shopping malls check quality control of the colours mixture/single are good for customers.Last, employees are all the
Products material things are packing and despatch in the malls
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 30, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...oredThen, first step is molten plastic.There have a three types of the mould like re...
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Line 4, column 82, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , blue
... three types of the mould like red mould,blue mould,yellow mould.But also,blue moul...
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Line 4, column 93, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , yellow
...s of the mould like red mould,blue mould,yellow mould.But also,blue mould check the q...
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Line 4, column 107, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
... like red mould,blue mould,yellow mould.But also,blue mould check the quality con...
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Line 4, column 110, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ke red mould,blue mould,yellow mould.But also,blue mould check the quality contro...
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Line 5, column 5, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , blue
...mould,blue mould,yellow mould.But also,blue mould check the quality control machine...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , yellow
...oducts are select and reject. As well as,yellow have a power there have reject the prod...
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Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'rejected'.
Suggestion: rejected
... well as,yellow have a power there have reject the products in the shops. Neverthel...
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Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , second
...e products in the shops. Nevertheless,second step in sort by hand choosing the mixe...
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Line 7, column 54, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...second step in sort by hand choosing the mixed colours and single colours in the ...
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Line 8, column 60, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'colours'' or 'colour's'?
Suggestion: colours'; colour's
...ping malls check quality control of the colours mixture/single are good for customers.L...
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Line 8, column 105, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Last
...s mixture/single are good for customers.Last, employees are all the Products mater...
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Line 8, column 120, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e are good for customers.Last, employees are all the Products material things ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, nevertheless, second, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 691.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 124.0 196.424390244 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57258064516 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33699396548 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18844288864 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629032258065 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 193.5 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.0047617698 43.030603864 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.2 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2 5.23603664747 252% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20663000343 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139761743674 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.205242555736 0.0843802449381 243% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112000689478 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.180302290338 0.0819641961636 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.2329268293 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 11.4140731707 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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