In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Our world is progressively evolving day by day in diverse fields to make human life more comfortable and modern. The photography and movie industry is striving to make the image become a dominant communication compared to the written word. I cannot deny a bunch of its benefits that entertain our life and make it easier, but the words still have its own invisible power.
Obviously, as an ancient adage said “A picture is worth a thousand words”, people always feel easily to understand and memorize what they can observe even just a glance rather than description of dozens of pages with full of words. This is the reason why the atlas of human anatomy was created with elaborate drawing pictures to help medical student able to visualize position of muscles, arteries, veins or nerves in different organs. Moreover, the movie industry has remarkably developed in transforming a romantic novel or even a science fiction onto widescreen. Therefore, the audiences can entirely marvel and immerse themselves in the footages without struggling figure about how it looks like or how it happens.
Nonetheless, only the written words can have transparent potentials which lead readers to use their creative thinking following in every single word. Each human being deems to be a specific individual who has their own imagination and point of view towards the same event. For that reason, it must be more fascinating when the readers experience the lines in their own way, such as feeling of the pain and the happiness, but not the scenes or images molded by the director.
In conclusion, advancement of the image helps people to catch the outcome from education as well as entertainment industry effortlessly. However, with the written word, reader will not be limited their own creative ability.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... be limited their own creative ability.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, nonetheless, so, still, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12542372881 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.775929699 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64406779661 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2380454058 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171803411974 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576216230226 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05597329783 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959845702858 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531723319558 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.