In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the picture has more impact on people in communication than text or content. I totally agree with the given statement because the image is more obvious and show different emotions.
The first reason why a photo is more attractive than written text is that the photograph looks clearer and easier to understand for people. When every person looks at the picture, they can understand the meaning that the photographer represents but for the writing, we must take time to read and analyse the content. For example, if you see many poorer children in South Africa, you can touch the feeling of them. You may decide to donate the money suddenly. But if you just read texts, you may not imagine the poverty of the children at all.
Moreover, looking at the film can express different aspects and moods depending on their emotional background at that moment. Many people have a lot of attitude to the photos, someone thinks in a positive way and somebody gets into the negative way which is possible. Texts describe the content through alphabets when see fastly people cannot feel and understand about the objective of the writer. For instance, the photographer takes a photo of the beach view and share this on the internet without a caption. One woman in a bad mood sees this picture and then feels down because she had bad memories with her boyfriend. On the other hand, one man that worked so hard sees the same photo, he may want to go to the beach for a rest.
In conclusion, the image has more effect on human emotion than written texts because the pictures are clear to understand within a second and express distinct and obvious feeling.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... attitude to the photos, someone thinks in a positive way and somebody gets into the negative way...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76041666667 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44822693069 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579861111111 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6381440093 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9285714286 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169018607525 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589115602428 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464611659896 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115683824665 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045653475536 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.