IN the modern world,it is no longer necessary to use animals for food or use animals products for instance,clothing and medicines .To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the sophisticated era, according to me, I think that all animals have right living in the earth because they should be equal values on the earth. I am disagree with this statement. There are plethora reason behind it. I will discuss my point of view in upcoming crumb.
Gone on the days, nowadays, all generation like the animals.Hence, amimals have a heart and they umpteen emotion in the amimals life.Afterthat,I thing that,it is unnessary use food and amimals like clothing and medicines. But also, animals life is very precious rathan than clothing as far as they have alot of clothings available in the market. For instance, jean, top, Shirt and jacket so on. Furthermore,they should be use the clothing to dweller in their life. In my mind,they are plethora clothing have in the market why adoloscent choosing the animals products like cotton clothes, wood so on. I think that, it is very wrong for the amimals life because they full right live to long time in their life.
Nevertheless, there is no doubt today technology is very fast and they all age group use as well as toddler,juvenile,teenager, Pupil and old etc.Then,
they should be umpteen medicines reqiriment to all dweller life because it nowadays education play a vital role in human life. Moreover, all generation is well co- education in their life. In my opinion, there have
Plethora medicines availables in all nations.For instance, all of plant give the best medicines like neem, tulsi,and aloe Vera gel so on.Last but not the least,
They have many products available in the market why we use the animals products.In piont of view,animals life is very indespensable because it is very honest ,tru and faithful etc.
In summarise,after analysing that issue reckon, there is no denying the fact that but also In my view, animals life is very essential rathan than human being life. Dweller life have full right in the earth according to me,I think that,animals have full right live in the earth they should be support and care and animals give us doubles love and cares for the person.I am request to all adolescent give the repect to the animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, well, as to, for instance, i think, no doubt, as well as, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91966759003 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91945470112 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484764542936 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 98.7897880462 49.4020404114 200% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.4 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1333333333 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188612347643 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704917271938 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425806686752 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947535255877 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481216256068 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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