The money given to help poor countries does not solve the problem of poverty, so rich countries should give other types of help instead.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the last decades, international aid to developing countries has escalated markedly in astounding ways. However, money donated to impoverished nations is not combatting the issue of poverty. Therefore, wealthy countries ought to rather offer different types of assists. I completely agree with this idea. This essay will discuss firstly on why providing capital is unsatisfactory and secondly, the alternative categories of services with relevant examples.

To begin with, the massive corruption is a potential outcome of giving big money. Cash is unlikely to reach for underprivileged people, wh...

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Average: 9 (3 votes)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, well, in conclusion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2012.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6676056338 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06658242872 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670422535211 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2406807783 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.75 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1875 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141593526526 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047377090288 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408708637299 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933033420548 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315399131029 0.056905535591 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.95 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 140.0 78.4519038076 178% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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for the corrupt officials typically either channel more than two-thirds of funds for a personal purpose or for their relatives,
because the corrupt officials typically either channel more than two-thirds of funds for a personal purpose or for their relatives,

Allowing a large scale migration can plunge the inadequacy of impoverished nations as the poor people can land decent jobs that can upgrade the low lives of the workers and additionally, the native country can strengthen the fragile economy.
Allowing a large scale migration can plunge the inadequacy of impoverished nations as the poor people can land decent jobs that can upgrade the low lives of the workers and additionally, while the native country can strengthen the fragile economy.
Allowing a large scale migration can plunge the inadequacy of impoverished nations as the poor people can land decent jobs that can upgrade the low lives of the workers and additionally. The native country can strengthen the fragile economy.

Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 355 350
No. of Characters: 1961 1500
No. of Different Words: 235 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.341 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.524 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.982 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 158 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 136 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 90 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 67 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.188 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.723 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.625 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.272 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.485 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.014 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5