More and more couples are deciding to be "child-free", to have no children, in other words. Some people claim that those couples reach this conclusion through entirely selfish reasons. While others think that they came to this decision through noble motives, such as concern about overpopulation and desire for independence. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this day and age, couples tend to have no children. While some people state this issue mainly dues to selfish reasons, others believe that this conclusion is decided by motivations. In this essay, both sides will be examined and I will give my opinion afterward.
On the one hand are people who claim “child-free” is caused by egotistically. The main reason for this belief is the tension of child-rearing. Some people are fed up with cry baby as well as the sound when babies cry which made them feel so annoyed. Furthermore, a child can be very stubborn and aggressive and people are not patient enough to look after. Another reason is bringing up a child waste lots of things including time, money, and energy as well. For instance, instead of educating a child, couples can spend time travel around or focus more on their work and “child-free” is also a way to reduce financial burden.
On the other hand, people believe that may noble motives are taken into consideration to decide on this issue. Overpopulation is thought to be one of the reasons since the total global citizens are increasing rapidly, which has reached 7.8 million this year. “Child-free” is a way to reduce the world population as well as cut down too much pressure on the environment. Moreover, the desire for independence is widely believed to be a crucial cause. People need their private space and prefer to achieve their goals which can hardly be done when taking care of a child. In fact, meaningful motivations are checked before deciding this problem.
In conclusion, both sides have their own merits. On balance, I, however, tend to believe the latter reasons since I think there should be worthy reasons for this issue.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, look, may, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88095238095 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79058572507 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612244897959 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8248885216 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4117647059 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2941176471 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35294117647 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357227980504 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106201634011 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072482507473 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207817075386 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702901689237 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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