More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people think a solution can be to increase the price of fattening foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
While many people suggest that raising the cost of foods contain the amount of high fat will reduce consumption extent and thereby people’s overweight issue can be addressed. In my opinion, I disagree with that idea and in this essay, I will state some reasons to prove my view.
The most compelling reason for holding my view is that many people will not accept discard some foods from the favorite list just because it’s cost more expensive. In other words, this way is just efficient to some persons whose low income or poor economy, whereas well-off people willing to pay a large amount of money as long as they satisfy their craving. Besides, fattening foods are not entirely responsible for the overweight in people. for example, a person use less fat substance but instead, he eats continuously the other things or use soft drink, as a result, he will own a fat body although he doesn’t depend on fattening foods too much.
In addition, there are many different useful ways to prevent obesity without raising the cost of foods that contain fat substance. The most effective and popular way is that burn amount of calories in body through exercise. The laziness and conception just want to relax are to blame for overweight in people. Therefore, with 30 minutes jogging, 3 kilometers cycling or 15 minutes gyming in a club, we can abandon the excess energy everyday and keep our body always healthy.
In conclusion, I believe that raising the cost of fattening foods don’t solve perfectly issue about obesity because people are ready to pay higher price for foods which are pleasant taste even if the fat content is higher. Instead, encouraging people to exercise will be a more effective method.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9175257732 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48779688393 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580756013746 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4317238893 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.25 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230341272069 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865855920339 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706375031541 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149206940352 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067480523541 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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