More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
Topic is believed to be one of the most common issue in today's contemporary life. This is a widely-held claim that majority people prefer to relocate to cities in order to find better life, but, there are identity complications in city life. This essay will examine the reasons why people are migrating to cities and discuss some possible solutions.
These days, humans are migrating to cities so as to indwell in idyllic life. However, they never think about that city life is complicated than village life. For instance: you have to have enough money to indwell in big cities, because, the first thing, which city demands you, is money. If you move to city to reside, firstly, you have to pay for rent, foods and some bills, secondly, you have to learn to reside in cities as oppidant. Furthermore, you have to accommodate to babel and choke-full in city life. Mostly, humans complain about the above mentioned considerations, since, these kind of reasons are ones of difficulties in living in city. In the forthcoming paragraph I intend to solve the above mentioned causes with appropriate solutions before reaching the conclusion.
In spite of the fact that living in city might be complicated, however, we can absolutely solve these causes. Thus, in the first place, governments should increase urbanization at villages, afterwards, people's amount may underbid, who are coming to cities in order to live there. In the second place, governments should decrease some bills for people who are indwelling and suffering from wantage of money in city. Thereby, governments have to make urban better as much as possible, then, living in city may be easy.
Taking all the above into account it may be concluded that humans and governments can solve every problems or reasons in my opinion, it just depends on thinking and mentality of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, as to, for instance, kind of, in my opinion, in spite of, in the first place, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01628664495 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6992823216 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560260586319 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9603690596 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416217679916 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141022041902 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831913793747 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229380273901 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099031512823 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.