Modern lifestyle has given humans both luxurious life and diseases. Eventhough, our medical field is well developed, often it fails to cure diseases which are related to food habits and lack of physical activities. Some believe that traditional medicines are the only solution for this. Although, i agree to that, i opine that right combination of daily routine change and food preferances change along with ancient treatment methods can guarantee a better life.
The most crucial illness prevailing in our society is high body weight and associated complications. A significant result of a stout body is heart attack, which is frequent even among youngsters. Evenif there are several methods for treating it in advanced medical field , it cannot ensure a complete recovery. In addition, people Who undergo such procedures eventually, become prone to another diseases.
Furthermore, people nowadays are suffering from high blood pressure, insomnia and diabetics. All these are caused due to their living conditions. Modern treatment methods can control these. However, recent studies are showing that increased consumption of medicines lead to cancer.
Efficient and rapid methadologies are required for dealing with these common medical condition. Such as change in lifestyle like proper physical activity and adopting method like ayurveda. The most prominent advantage of this method is that it does not have any side effects even with prolonged usage. It is because all the incredients are natural and chemical free.
In conclusion, though traditional methods can offer speedy recovery, it will definitely cure the disease and thus ensures a healthy life. Neverthless modern maedicines might offer a appalling result.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61832061069 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80245419446 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664122137405 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9159517034 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7777777778 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5555555556 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27777777778 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151195858571 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431057331357 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323770447242 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764997169099 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338093475584 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.72 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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