More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern lifestyle which cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people think that a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged. To what extend do you agree?
It is true that some of scientifically untreated problems involving human derived from their new ways of life and the trend towards conventional methods to treat this problem is becoming common. While I agree that traditional medicine may be effective in certain conditions, I am of the opinion that modern medicine has still the pivotal role to play in curing new types of diseases.
On the one hand, various types of traditional medicine are highly recommended to address some annoying problems. For example, having been under a huge volume of pressure related to the work, people are often suffering from insomnia. In order to solve this issue, acupuncture, as an oldest treating ways, can be much more effective than chemical drugs. In fact, not only does it assist people to eradicate this illness, but also it is entirely free of side effects. In addition most type of conventional methods are based on herbs and plants which are normally consistent with human nature and may have a positive effect on their mind.
On the other hand, with considering all benefits of traditional medicine, it is not rational to rely on them. Firstly, there are enormous evidences illustrating the high rate of mortality in the past. It means that old methods had not been enough efficient in treating current diseases such as cholera and plague just to name. As a result, these methods are not likely to be applicable to cure today's serious problems like cancer or diabetes. Moreover, modern medicine is going to be progressed with a rapid pace, while traditional remedies have been mainly constant over time. Although it seems that there is not initially a certain treatment for new emerged problems, extensive medical research are conducted continuously to find a solution, which are generally successful. In other words, if these new diseases had been appeared in the past, undoubtedly a great deal number of people would have died and ancient methods would not been adequate to tackle with them.
In conclusion, I believe that traditional medicine can act as a supplementary treatment along with modern ways to fight with novel diseases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, still, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, in other words, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08522727273 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74134626394 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579545454545 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3456582278 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.333333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4666666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0666666667 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254344074643 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739882195369 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476137592346 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153202419058 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220163543733 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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