More and more people are using computer and other electronic devices to access information So printing of books magazine and newspaper should be done Discuss both view and give your opinion

Essay topics:

More and more people are using computer and other electronic devices to access information.So printing of books, magazine and newspaper should be done.

Discuss both view and give your opinion.

In modern era, technology is rapidly growing in 21st century. Now generation using more and more computer and other electric gadgets. However, majority of people decrease uses of books, newspaper and magazine. In this essay discuss both views with some example.

On the one hand, technology takes the position of paper based reading materials. Nowadays people use cell phone and laptop's and other technical gadgets. First cardinal advantage it is reducing efforts from their task through technology, people who is are professional, Also save time by it. For example, people who is are account, data-type operator, they might be helpful in their professional because reduced calculation and typing. Another upcoming advantage is that, Technology is also used in educational sector. Today's world, Classrooms are converting in virtual classrooms. For instance, Students who are belonged to remote area, they can be access virtual classroom through using technology. As result of technology is very vital tools, which through access any kind of information any corner of the world.

On the other hand, papers based reading materials are also important. The obvious reason is that, people who are old ages and senior citizens.They can not be easily to get access to information by technology. They might be . Helpful books and newspapers and magazines. Another important reason, which is I consider technology is not working in remote area, people are accessing information via paper based material. As result of certain level technology useful but books and newspaper are also useful.

To sum up, Scientist gives technology, it is god gift. Technology is important nowadays but also books, magazines and newspaper are also essential in today's.

Votes
Average: 9 (27 votes)

Comments

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, for example, for instance, kind of, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52767527675 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78022620731 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571955719557 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6425307743 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.55 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229217991017 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687521240342 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626543022575 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155816491383 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08514262231 0.056905535591 150% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.2 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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