More and more people in the city lice in homes with small spaces or no outdoor areas. Do you think it is negative or possitive development.
It is argued that urban residents have less and less spaces and no outdoor areas. While many people supposes that it is the good signal for city development, it seems to me that it is a negative development.
On the one hand, there is a variety of reasons why people believe it is a good thing when urban people had less spaces and outdoor areas.Firstly , a lot of construction was built to improve standard of life for people and therfore outdoor areas reduce significantly. This lead to more mordern spaces for entertainment or land for industry which help increase necessary services for people. Secondly, some people believe that outdoor activities had more risk than indoor activities . So, outdoor areas are not important and it can be insteaded by indoor areas. Moreover, a few people prefer the small space than the large space because it creat a warm feeling it is not waste too much time to moving.
On the other hand, in my opinion, the smaller space and also the less outdoor areas brings more disadvanteage than advantage. For example, people tend to be more easily to get stressed when they stay too long with indoor activities. Meanwhile, Outdoor space with outdoor activities such as sports , arts is always the best way to relax. In addition, narrow space could reduce health of urban citizens. For instance, a children who always live inside the house with narrow space could had the weaker eyes with the shorter vision. By constract, children live in the large space as countryside will adopt rapidly with environment and weather changes.
In conclusion, there are various reasons for possitive opinons in term of restricting spaces and outdoor areas in the city. However, in my opinion,many negative problems will become more serious if this phenomenon continue rising rapidly in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun spaces is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9801980198 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64366158179 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547854785479 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7193718898 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.6 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342251333894 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111490887008 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354073037455 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209223905056 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358199860537 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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