As more and more people move to cities to find work, the volume of traffic on the roads increases. What are some problems associated with the increase in the number of vehicles in cities? What solutions could be proposed?
One of the most topical issues in modern society is increasing volume of traffics which is occurred by the movement of people to cities to find a job. This has become a major problem for city dwellers. This essay will discuss the problems associated with this trend and offer some measures to tackle this issue.
Generally speaking, there are two main results of urbanization. Firstly, it is a well-known fact that increasing the volume of traffic results in air pollution. For example, when more cars come to the cities, they will emit more exhaust fumes. Therefore, the air will become more polluted. Secondly, it has been proven that excessive traffic congestion leads to some diseases. The result of this is that people breathe in toxic fumes, which in turn leads to respiratory diseases such as asthma.
Despite these challenges, there are a number of ways to resolve this issue. Governments should expand the carrying capacity of the roads. If the roads are expanded by adding some lanes, the traffic will be decreased. A second solution, the governments should legislate laws to reduce and mitigate traffic congestion. For example, by considering some areas as a traffic zone or imposing fine for some cars which break the laws.
In conclusion, mitigating traffic congestion is a topic which is very relevant to modern society. However, I believe that the best solution is to discourage people from coming to the cities by legislating laws. If cities have strict rules, fewer cars would come to the cities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07936507937 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62844334382 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.450580674 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.2941176471 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8235294118 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262382087313 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738289891869 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502997895743 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14634268381 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383954178455 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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