More and more people think there uis no need for printed paper newspaper. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the advancement of technology, life is more convenient and modern when we search or update the daily news, and the Internet contributes a vital role in this statement. I agree that online news instead of printed dailies is no longer useful for the masses.
On the one hand, there are a huge of reasons that we have to continue printing newspapers, but I am merely telling you two reasons. The first reason relates to improved chances of finding satisfactory journalism work after graduation. This is because the rate of unemployment in both big cities and the countryside has had a sharp rise. As a result, keeping printing enterprises can both help the jobless have a stable jobs and also reduce their bankruptcy when. In addition, printed media seem that the pristine beauty of people's culture from many generations. Thus, continuing to print paper newspapers means that people are acting as a catalyst to flourish and maintain this traditional civilization.
On the other hand, there are a variety of reasons why I also believe the Internet brings us more opportunities to read online news. Firstly, viewers can be easy to read the new information published up to the minutes by the newspaper websites. For example, those who follow news such as political events, stock market movements, or those who are simply keen on sport have all come to expect instant communication. Moreover, you only pay a small amount to own some electronic devices that only require a click of a mouse to read what you like. Therefore, we can save more money on costly living or childcare.
To conclude, more and more options are appearing to sustain reading habits. Although environmental advantages are essential, a high number of readers are steel willing and well-using printed material. For those reasons, I can not completely say that newspaper printed format is not needed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 36, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00964630225 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82442895295 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639871382637 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6689415677 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.375 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249465139905 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717152577264 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526258351697 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141639481654 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276163128005 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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