Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life?
Nowadays, many new couples have clear plans for their married life, including having kids later in life. To the best of my knowledge, there are various reasons behind this phenomenon, and I suppose that the merits would eclipse the downsides.
Various reasons leave behind the problems why people tend to have kids later. First and foremost, it relates to the increase in pressure and career paths when they have children soon. In developed societies, the labor market is increasingly competitive, so they want to spend at least several years laying the foundation for their work and future steps. If they have children too soon after marriage, they will suffer an enormous burden between looking after children and earning for living. As a result, young people today decide to have children late. Moreover, most couples want to have stable finance and job before becoming parents. Therefore, their kids can live in a sufficient environment and develop all their abilities.
The trend exerts both advantageous and disadvantageous influences on society and families. On the one hand, when children were born late, they are taken care of by experienced parents so that they own better living conditions and better education. As a result, kids can contribute more to society. Nevertheless, parents are not interrupted in working by bringing up kids or being pregnant. On the other hand, it could both heighten the possibility of infertility among mothers in their old age and risk the newborn babies’ mental and physical health. If any complicated maternal health problem arises, the life whole family would be turned upside down.
In conclusion, I believe that pursuing a career and the need for the best conditions for your child are factors that prevent people from giving birth at a young age and this situation would bring more disadvantages for society than advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, at least, i suppose, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18421052632 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67568304894 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6516903556 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248183895679 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747590215411 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621027978494 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137450249882 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488315799473 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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