More and more people want to buy famous brands or clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
It is widely believed that there is a significant increase in the number of humans’ desires for well-known brands such as clothes or cars. There are many factors which directly contribute to this issue, and my firm conviction is that such a increasing demand in famous items is a positive development in modern society.
To begin with, several reasons can fully explain why this recent trend emerges on a large scale. Firstly, purchasing expensive items is believed to possess a higher token of identity in humans. In addition, since people nowadays tend to assess status of humans just by a glimpse on physical appereance, young generation starts to pay attention more on their outlook by owning more exorbitant items. For instance, it is a common phenomenon when a woman buy many dresses which she never wears or a man purchase the newest type of private cars. Moreover, the increasing emergence of attractive adverts is also a potential factor. Additionally, living in the world full of advertisements, people are spontaneously pushed to live in a consumerism society. For instance, if Gucci do not bombard too many adverts on a global scale, it will not receive a massive amount of expenditure via trendy clothes or handbags from young consumers.
However, I strongly believe this recent trend in purchasing more exerts positive impacts on people’s lives. It cannot be denied that reputable brands provide customers with high quality products and reliability, leading to a sense of satisfaction in buyers. To begin with, it is the recent society that many people are defrauded by low quality items. Hence, the appearance of famous brands can easily tackle this alarming problem.For instance, Toyota has recently supplied consumers with the more convenient type of cars. Moreover, the more the things are bought, the more the workers will works harder to meet their demands. Hence, they can not only improve their efficiency at work but also contribute larely to their nations’ wealth.
Taking everything into consideration, so attractive and beneficial are the expensive products such as cars or outfits that humans desire to own them more. Personally,I belive this issue directly lead to many positive impacts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23184357542 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83085503123 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58938547486 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.629959352 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.176470588 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0588235294 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17647058824 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222950632089 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613856223201 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448871871774 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125441971703 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021862076191 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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