More and more people want to study at university, so competition of university places is increasing. Why do more people want to study at university? Is it positive or negative?
It is true that studying at university is becoming more popular among people, which cause more intense competition and strict assessment of enrollment. Many factors contribute to this phenomenon, and I believe this stream has both positive and negative influence on our society.
People prefer to study at university due to several reasons. Firstly, they are searching for better education. It is more likely for universities to have high quality educational resources including the faculty, laboratories and technologies. These enable students to have access to the frontier of some subjects or academic areas. Secondly, college campus provides students a better environment for studying, which will make them concentrate on their studies. Finally, more people who go to the university are aiming for the bachelor or higher degree. Usually, the degree certificate is a qualification of someone’s ability, which will make them become more competitive when hunting job.
Personally, I believe this phenomenon has two sides. On the one hand, it is advantageous to the society. More people chasing for college positions reflect their enthusiasm of the knowledge. As a result of this, it would be beneficial to promote the citizens’ knowledge as well as quality, and help to develop the human society in the long term. On the other hand, some negative effect should be considered. If the competition is getting too intense, it will cause too much pressure to most students, which may lead to some mental illness. And once some people fail to get the chance, they would have difficulties in their future life and career due to the competitive world.
In conclusion, the increasing competition of university places involved in many factors. Although it has both positive and negative effect, it seems to unavoidable due to the development of the whole society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38305084746 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00807302166 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576271186441 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2050061336 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2222222222 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3888888889 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302738125536 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880387097362 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102444992465 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18349575288 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070020755098 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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