More and more people work at home and study at home with the development of computer technology. Do you think it is a positive or negative development.
Thanks to the development of technology, many people in this contemporary society incline to keep their work’s progress or educational courses via computers. Additionally, this recent trend adopts many positive impacts to human’s life. Hence, my firm conviction is that such an increasing dependence on technological devices brings about advantageous development to the whole society.
To begin with, an online access helps not only companies but also schools slash the exorbitant budget. In terms of working in real life, organisations and educational facilities have to allocate money on different economic stuffs such as equipment, renting premises. For instance, it is Lotteria office in HCM city that the employer is concerned about the expensive expenditure on renting facility. Hence, the more the workers or students are allowed to spend time doing tasks through computers, the less the money is consummed, having more opportunities to allocate budget on other problems.
Moreover, another remarkable merit includes the great degree of flexibility in both employees and youngsters. If workers engage many hours in workplace, they will have to depend their time schedule on employer’s demand. However, this trend is totally different when it comes to online working since aldults have more chances to keep their own pace and manage appropriate time to deal with heavy workloads. In terms of education-related issues, many students who struggle to keep the overall progress at school suffer from depression. However, This case can be effectively improved when adolescents learn by themselves since they know their ability.
Taking everything into consideration, such a common use of modern computers is believed to bring many positive consequences such as saving money or flexibility. Hence, people should be encouraged to adopt this new method more.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'online access'.
Suggestion: online access
... to the whole society. To begin with, an online access helps not only companies but also schoo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6148409894 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02712415137 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657243816254 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6232891221 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161978848126 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474932882345 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406858893247 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933433115177 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225099055015 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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