In many countries, people are spending more hours at their workplace. Why is that? Is that a negative and positive development?
In this contemporary society, overworking has been claimed to increase significantly in many countries. There are many reasons behind this recent trend, and my firm conviction is that this is more likely to bring about negative consequences to people.
One of the main roots that lead to overtime working is the financial burden in daily life. It is widely considered that the more time workers spend working, the higher salaries they can earn to improve their personal life. If money is not received enough to cover all the living expenses and private demands, people can easily face anxiety and stressful disorders, which is definitely a nightmare to them. Moreover, in this competitive condition of workforce, engaging as many time at work as possible is an direct way for workers to achieve higher promotion. It is human who always wants to stand in higher place and recieve respect of other employees. For example, my cousin once said that the reason why he regularly spent almost a day at work when he was young was he wanted to increase his position to manager. Hence, hard- working performance can create opportunities for people to achieve their promotional dream.
However, although there are many judicious factors support overkorking, several related-drawbacks can threaten humans. Firstly, weakening in health is what overtime working is all about. People who engage many hours at work can lose energy and persistence, they face chronic fatigue syndrome, headache, irrigation, negatively affecting their health conditions. Secondly, spending more time at work means less time for families. In addition to that, many issues such as divorce, domestic violence can appear due to poor connection between family members.
Taking everything into consideration, there are many contributors such as salaries, promotion that tempt people to spend time working harder. However, due to many health and family-related problems , i incline this trend as a negative development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36655948553 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88952395759 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623794212219 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3547099209 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.3125 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25297235712 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729611901374 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559204212452 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150591093177 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335716122677 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.