Newspaper have an enormous influence on people’s views. Why is that? Is this a positive or negative development.
This recent society has experienced an impressive influence from newspaper. There are many reasons behind this common issue, and my firm conviction is that such an over-dependence on newspaper may invoke negative development.
On the other hand, there are certain factors why newspaper has significantly influenced people’s viewpoints. To begin with, it is the expansion of press industry that people are bombarded to different types of information via newspapers on a daily basis. For instance, the emergence of many informative sources in Vietnam such as Tuoi Tre, Thanh Nien provides people with daily news. Hence, such a frequent approach to newspaper can successfully change people’s opinions and ideas. Moreover, since the news in this contemporary society is highly updated, people may wipe out all the outdated concepts in the past. For instance, older people who mostly support the conventional education are now more opened to home-schooling thanks to reading educational stuffs from newspaper. Hence, it is really difficult to deny the fact that newspaper plays an important role in mind’s alteration.
Despite the reasons describe above, I believe there are many problems related to this common issue. Firstly, readers are at the risks of taking erroneous information after being exposed too much on newspaper. Additionally, it is really common to see a journalist publishs false headlines about celebirities to draw public’s attention, earning an exorbitant amount of profits. Consequently, such a lack of credibility in newspaper not only causes hesitation in readers but also negatively affects the subjects targeted by profit-oriented business. Moreover, advertising is mainly what the contemporary content of newspapers is all about. Instead of focusing on political or social information, newspapers nowadays are filled with various adverts to attract people. Thus,as there is a big loss in the original purpose of news, viewers are encouraged to find another reliable sources instead of newspapers.
Taking everything into consideration, while reading news brings inevitable alteration to people’s viewpoints, I believe this popular habit can cause negative aspects which do harm to people’s life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 768, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , as
... various adverts to attract people. Thus,as there is a big loss in the original pur...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, really, so, thus, while, for instance, in fact, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1902.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69461077844 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12055341791 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634730538922 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3718661227 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.882352941 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6470588235 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.17647058824 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264951473345 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797404645024 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598410741069 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163442706355 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543551483248 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.