Some people think the qualities a person needs to become successful in today’s world cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this contemporary society, there are a variety of qualities which humans need to possess in order to become successful. However, many people believe that academic knowledge or skill learned from tertiary schools is not directly linked to this issue. In my point of view, i only agree with this statement in some extents. Although it cannot be denied that there are several meaningful elements which contribute to the success of each individual, the role of university or academy should not be underestimated.
On the other hand, the reason why I believe school or academic institution is essential in term of bringing out achievement in future life comes from many perspectives. Firstly, institution’s courses provide students with theoretical knowledge related to future jobs. For instance, being a doctor means understanding about humans’ physical structure and skeletons. Hence, the more the students spend time possessing an in-depth knowledge in colleges, the more successful the will become in the future. Moreover, learning at university also helps children to cooperate with different people. The vast majority of jobs in this competitive job market require teamwork and collaborative assignment. Hence, being familiar with this type of skills help kids feel less stressful and more straightforward in the future, avoiding higher rate of unemployment.
However, experience gained from social life also plays an important role in measuring success. It is widely believed that obtaining skills from universities or academic classes is insufficient as people may face with more difficulties in the real life. Hence, gaining more experience will help humans to avoid the same mistakes and become more steadfast to achieve later accomplishment. For instance, it is not difficult to witness an excellent person fail to find the judicious job due to the scarcity of practical experience.
Taking everything into consideration, I partly agree with the former statement. Although I cannot deny that some qualities including life exeperiene contribute to the success of humans, the significant role of tertiary school or academic course should not be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55120481928 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07675525848 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590361445783 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3821451268 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.411764706 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5294117647 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206883235504 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061348334664 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422937298957 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13448906872 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489399444519 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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