Today, large shopping center and supermarkets are more common than small local shops. Is this a negative or positive development
Thanks to the development of economy , there has been an increasing number of shopping malls and supermarkets built in the central areas. Moreover, many people consider that these types of shopping destinations are more convenient and common than local stores. Personally, I approve with this statement in certain aspects.
On the other hand, I understand why many people of the fervent conviction argue that such an emergence of modern shopping malls is really convenient and beneficial. Firstly, supermarkets and department store offer more discounts and promotions which local shops cannot gratify. For example, it is Vincom Center in HCM City that visitors can purchase their favorite clothes with affordable price in Black Friday. Hence, it is widely believed that visitors may save massive amount of expenditure by shopping in malls. Secondly, a wide range of stores is what the main merit of supermarkets is all about. In addition, thanks to the availability of different shops in one particular market such as fashion store, food shop, customers can save time which is spent to transfer to shops located in different destinations. That is the reason why many people around the world prefer to buy products in supermarkets than smaller stores.
However, I believe that such a higher rate of popularity in shopping malls does not mean the less importance of small shops. In addition, smaller stores adopt high-quality customer services. Compared to larger supermarkets and department stores, locally-owned businesses are likely to provide more friendlier attitudes toward customers. According to research, women in Korea incline to purchase food in local stores due to a more comfortable and satisfying atmosphere.
Taking everything into consideration, although I cannot denny the fact that such a common appearance of supermarkets and shopping malls brings about merits in term of time and money, the advantage of local malls cannot be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42295081967 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93810296927 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593442622951 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2142553725 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.266666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335578790604 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100973249494 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656268993217 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202130656263 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064715845661 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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