17. The diagram shows how recycled paper is made
The process provides materials and equiqment used in the manufacture of recycled paper.
In overall, there are 4 main steps in the production of recycled paper.It is clear that the making of recycled paper include which include used paper undergoing various processes under different conditions, the product of which is later transferred into recycled one.
The process commences when used paper is collected and placed in a conveyor belt which transfers it to a cointainer. Once the waste paper scraps are poured down, they are immersed in water and chemical elements to become unfiltered pulp.
After the filtering step, the next stage involves putting the filtered pulp in the machine made up of water and soap. At this point, air will be stored in the air pump while ink will be discharged by a tube. The clean pulp is then transferred to the last cointainer through a small pipe. After being submerged by water, the paper mixture is put to dry via a heat roller . The last step is the formation of rolls of recycled paper.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: It
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... mixture is put to dry via a heat roller . The last step is the formation of rolls...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86363636364 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57021788599 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.861904566 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1111111111 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206445919876 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850180394709 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716227075647 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132992639101 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484866343148 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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