Nowadays, large shopping centers and supermarkets are more common than
small local shops. Is this a negative or positive development? Give reasons for
your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
Supermarkets and shopping centers have gained immense popularity over the
past few decades due to a range of conveniences they offer. I firmly believe this
phenomenon is a positive one.
To begin with, shopping malls and supermarkets provide consumers with a wide
range of goods and products. This is particularly convenient to shoppers as they
can compare between various brands before purchasing items that best suit their
needs, while this satisfaction can hardly be achieved when they shop at smaller
stores. Shopping in big complexes could also act as an efficient time-saver for
busy modern shoppers as they could obtain almost everything they need under
one roof and benefit from a lower chance of low stock.
Furthermore, the quality of products in supermarkets and shopping malls is
trustworthy and superior to those from traditional outlets. It is a given fact that
these giant stores only go into partnership with the suppliers who can provide
products of premium quality and at a reasonable price. This requires
manufacturers to make every effort to innovate their production lines and
enhance their product quality in order to compete against other rivals to attract
more customers. This would then benefit the end users.
Last but not least, large shopping center accommodates various service-oriented
features and activities other than merely retailing goods. To be more specific,
consumers can enjoy children’s playground, virtual reality games or movies in
incorporated cineplexes. This would result in a satisfying shopping experience,
thus obtaining an increase in returning visits.
To conclude, since supermarkets offer shoppers with reasonably-priced and high
quality products with wonderful experiences, I believe the prevalence of
supermarkets is a positive development.
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...obtain almost everything they need under one roof and benefit from a lower chance...
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...ts in supermarkets and shopping malls is trustworthy and superior to those from t...
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...t to innovate their production lines and enhance their product quality in order t...
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... compete against other rivals to attract more customers. This would then benefit ...
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...er accommodates various service-oriented features and activities other than merel...
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...ly retailing goods. To be more specific, consumers can enjoy children’s playgroun...
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...ound, virtual reality games or movies in incorporated cineplexes. This would resu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, thus, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74358974359 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10558774262 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648351648352 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1848687366 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.615384615 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.38176352705 571% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192371740015 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692871224231 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314828851872 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0527937652089 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471594786081 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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