The education you receive from your family is more important than the
education you receive from school. To what extent do you agree with this
statement and why? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant
examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Education comes from many places, not just formal schooling. People learn from
their family, their friends, the television and personal experience among many
other ways. Although these avenues of learning are certainly important, I believe
that education within schools is much more important, as it lays the foundations
for future achievement and wider success as I shall show.
Firstly, formal qualifications which are earned at school are often the entry points
to certain careers and jobs. In order to be a lawyer or doctor, you need to do well
at school so you can go on to study for professional qualifications. Additionally,
many jobs ask for basic qualifications in Maths and English when you apply.
Without these qualifications, an individual could become limited in what they can
do with their professional lives.
In addition to this, school also prepares you for relationships outside your family,
which is an important aspect of life. School is a good socialisation tool because a
student needs to deal with relationships on many different levels, for example
with teachers and school friends, and they also need to deal with threats to
happiness such as bullying.
Families are important as often children gain their moral outlook and aspirational
goals from their parents. Although, children can succeed to a certain extent,
without a favourable family setting, it is doubtful whether they could succeed
without schooling.
In conclusion, there are many beneficial forms of education, however, I believe
schooling is more important than education within the family. This is because
formal education gives you qualifications and socialisation that the family cannot
offer.
Comments
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...just formal schooling. People learn from their family, their friends, the televis...
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...ision and personal experience among many other ways. Although these avenues of le...
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...rning are certainly important, I believe that education within schools is much mo...
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...re important, as it lays the foundations for future achievement and wider success...
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...ned at school are often the entry points to certain careers and jobs. In order to...
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... a lawyer or doctor, you need to do well at school so you can go on to study for ...
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Line 8, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ofessional qualifications. Additionally, many jobs ask for basic qualifications i...
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...al could become limited in what they can do with their professional lives. In ad...
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...u for relationships outside your family, which is an important aspect of life. Sc...
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...l is a good socialisation tool because a student needs to deal with relationships...
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Suggestion: many
...ent needs to deal with relationships on many different levels, for example with teachers and...
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...ps on many different levels, for example with teachers and school friends, and th...
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Line 15, column 77, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...d they also need to deal with threats to happiness such as bullying. Families ar...
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Line 17, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ain their moral outlook and aspirational goals from their parents. Although, chil...
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Line 19, column 79, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...t is doubtful whether they could succeed without schooling. In conclusion, there...
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Line 21, column 80, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...l forms of education, however, I believe schooling is more important than educati...
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Line 22, column 78, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ation within the family. This is because formal education gives you qualification...
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...and socialisation that the family cannot offer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55681818182 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01126357753 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579545454545 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0859796625 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.846153846 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29035802955 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990003693192 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05619278211 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0753284447682 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674926976696 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...just formal schooling. People learn from their family, their friends, the televis...
^^^
Line 2, column 79, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ision and personal experience among many other ways. Although these avenues of le...
^^^
Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rning are certainly important, I believe that education within schools is much mo...
^^^
Line 4, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re important, as it lays the foundations for future achievement and wider success...
^^^
Line 6, column 85, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ned at school are often the entry points to certain careers and jobs. In order to...
^^^
Line 7, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a lawyer or doctor, you need to do well at school so you can go on to study for ...
^^^
Line 8, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ofessional qualifications. Additionally, many jobs ask for basic qualifications i...
^^^
Line 10, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al could become limited in what they can do with their professional lives. In ad...
^^^
Line 12, column 85, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u for relationships outside your family, which is an important aspect of life. Sc...
^^^
Line 13, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l is a good socialisation tool because a student needs to deal with relationships...
^^^
Line 14, column 45, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ent needs to deal with relationships on many different levels, for example with teachers and...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 14, column 79, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ps on many different levels, for example with teachers and school friends, and th...
^^^
Line 15, column 77, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d they also need to deal with threats to happiness such as bullying. Families ar...
^^^
Line 17, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ain their moral outlook and aspirational goals from their parents. Although, chil...
^^^
Line 19, column 79, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t is doubtful whether they could succeed without schooling. In conclusion, there...
^^^
Line 21, column 80, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l forms of education, however, I believe schooling is more important than educati...
^^^
Line 22, column 78, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ation within the family. This is because formal education gives you qualification...
^^^
Line 23, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and socialisation that the family cannot offer.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55681818182 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01126357753 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579545454545 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0859796625 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.846153846 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29035802955 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990003693192 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05619278211 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0753284447682 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674926976696 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.