48.The following pie charts show the use of social media by men and women in Australia in 2011 and 2014.
The pie charts compare men and women in terms of social media use in Australia during the period of 3 years, which began in 2011.
Overall, it is clear that in 2011, the highest proportion was from never type in men and once a week type in women. However, it was 2014 that both genders experienced the highest percentage of social media use in the everyday group.
According to male gender, in2011, never sector dominated the first place with 44%. However, the next 3 years experienced a significant decrease , accoungting for only 30% at the end of the period. In contrast, starting with only 25% in 2011, the percentage of men using the media every day grew massively to 45%, achieving the first place in 2014. While the proportion of men using social network once a week experienced a slight decline from 12% in 2011 to 9% in 2014, the few times a week section also saw the same trend with the decrease by 3%.
Referring to the female gender, 30% of people spent every day using social media, and this figure continued to rise significantly during the next 3 years. Like wise, the never use group which accounted for 8% in 2011 also surged to 22% in 2014. In contrast, both the once a week type and few times a week sector witnessed a significant decline in the proportion of time spent on social media, by 29% and 13% respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61764705882 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55053097259 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491596638655 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4500387022 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.111111111 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4444444444 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333221598325 0.215688989381 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149918660315 0.103423049105 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130397796452 0.0843802449381 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251803492895 0.15604864568 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120450239221 0.0819641961636 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.