Some people think the fittest and strongest individual help achieve success in sport. Some people believe success is much related to mental attitudes. Discuss bowth views and give your opinions.
In this contemporary society, humans have different viewpoints about the direct factor which leads to the triumph in the field of sport. In addition, while many people believe athletes with highest level of physical fitness contribute massively to the accomplishment of sport, the others realize the importance of mental condition . Personally, although I cannot deny the essential role of physical condition, I believe a psychological factor is more significant in term of assessing success.
On the other hand, I understand why many people of the fervent conviction claim that the emergence of highest fitness level is indispensable in sporting success. To begin with, most competitions’ outcomes are determined by physical fitness and muscular strength. For instance, the more the weightlifters can lift weights, the higher accomplishment they will achieve. Hence, it is really obvious that a focus on fitness level may bring about more positive consequences. Futhermore, a sportman who possesses sufficient fitness level is more resistant to harsh conditions. In addition, sporting field is a really difficult and demanding area, requiring extreme level of physical condition. Hence, such health problems related to blood pressure or heart disease will come as expense if a certain fitness condition is not fully sufficient.
Despite the reasons described above, I’m of the opinion that mental factors are more important than physical ones. Firstly, since most participants nowadays are well-trained and talented, the mental toughness would significantly affect the overall results. For instance, In an Olympic games, competitors who can hold their calmness are likely to avoid making mistakes and achieving a great sense of success. Secondly, even a team with strongest members may fail to receive laudable achievement if there is a lack of collaboration and sympathy. This is actually the case happened in football match where players know how to cooperate to pass the ball and score remarkable results. Hence, it is more judicious to have a concentration on different requirements than prioritizing only fitness condition.
Taking everything into consideration, although I cannot deny the beneficial aspects of well-trained sprotmen due to many factors, such a focus on mental attitudes is more essential in term of achieving success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1996.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60674157303 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11580049054 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581460674157 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9634230022 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.411764706 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9411764706 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76470588235 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142108548931 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413426031434 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428376687427 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093444087378 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241405335634 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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