Some people think the qualities a person needs to become successful in today's world cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, numerous people still think that an academic degree is considered to be successful in life. However, those who feel that college or educational institution does not give full of qualities the institutions. I
agree with this statement due to some reasons.
On the one hand, several reasons explain the certain benefits could be
seen in university study. Firstly, the most significant of which are students in some specializes can be equipped with knowledge in academic institutions, not in life. For example, doctors usually take classes in basic sciences such as anatomy, and pharmacology, and also learn the basics of interviewing and examining their patients before working in medical facilities. These are only provided by medical schools. In addition, academic institutions would prepare students with the foundation needed to pursue their career paths. As a result, on annual basis, many colleges organize internship programs for students so that after graduating, they have more opportunities to apply for well-paid jobs or security places.
On the other hand, there are various reasons why I still believe that success in life asks for more than what you learn at university. The first reason is that during working, you find that theory learned at the academy is not sufficient, even though some are not helpful.
For instance, working in offices requires more skills such as consulting customers and persuading them to sign contracts that you only achieve through exposure and work. Moreover, in some cases, people are born
with silver spoons or inherent innate. Therefore, they oughtn't even to study to be wealthy or successful.
To sum up, even though enjoying higher education still holds a vital role, I strongly believe that many people gain success and do not need to learn from a university because experience and skill are more necessary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, in some cases, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28762541806 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74173250413 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635451505017 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5581225415 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.4 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8666666667 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250546218571 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738822748381 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049939831525 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974297817767 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520665857403 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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