Crime rate has significantly increased all over the world .Many building are constructed for keeping prisoners in them. Some people think that illegal activities will be decreased if criminals are kept in the jail for longer period of time while other believes giving proper medical and psychological treatment is better option. This essay will explain both the views of statement.
In the beginning, unwanted activities had drastically inclined every day in many countries so some of the people feel that if such person are kept in the prison for more year then crime rate can be reduced in certain number. For instance, people who is involved in crime like human trafficking , drug dealing are arrested and given punishment for longer period then the illegal things will declined and problem can be solved. However, criminal minded people will conduct their activities if they are in jail as well. Thus, many people feel that if criminals are kept for longer time in the jail then the crime will go down.
Secondly, giving punishment for longer time is not a solution but if we provide proper medical treatment to them then illegal things will fall down. In the other hand, human being will not be criminal since they born but they will be involved in unwanted activities after facing many problem in life like not able to pay the medical bill of their family member or school bill of their children but if they are given proper job then they will definitely do better in society. Whereas, awareness program should be carried out in society. They should be given proper knowledge about law for committing any crime. Hence, if they are properly given medical and psychological assistance then crime percentage will be controlled all over the country.
To sum up, i think keeping them in jail for longer period of time will not solve the problem but if they are given appropriate treatment then they can follow the right path in their future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, whereas, while, for instance, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92424242424 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4405977493 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475757575758 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.7318533344 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3846153846 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183338410926 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797345124681 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424531012285 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12290702023 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603749598907 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.