Education is the most important thing in the world. Despite of, knowing this people are still interested to get married before completing their study and getting a proper job for their career development. This essay will elaborate, how i completely disagree with the statement.
Firstly, maturity level of people will not be develop at early age due to which they can suffer from mental stress. When they get married at early age then they do not have idea about how to handle a new relationship due to which there may be fights at their home. According to the survey done by London in 2015, results came out that many teenage are getting divorce because of marriage after finishing their school. Hence, they will be physically and mentally unstable if they perform the wedding rituals before completing their education.
Secondly, for getting a proper job people need a good education and skill. Ultimately, if they could not complete their education as a result they will not able to accomplish the task at their company. They will do a lot of mistake at work due to frustration because of this they can not achieve future goal. For instance, a girl is married at a small age and she has not completed her study then she has less chance of obtaining the job which she wants to do . Thus, lack of knowledge and skill they can not built their career if they do not have proper academic qualification.
To sum up that, maturity level of people will not be developed and they lacks the skill which leads degradation of their living standard
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...thing in the world. Despite of, knowing this people are still interested to get marr...
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...ich they can suffer from mental stress. When they get married at early age then they...
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...econdly, for getting a proper job people need a good education and skill. Ultimat...
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...ey could not complete their education as a result they will not able to accomplis...
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...the task at their company. They will do a lot of mistake at work due to frustration because of t...
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... obtaining the job which she wants to do . Thus, lack of knowledge and skill they ...
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...ack of knowledge and skill they can not built their career if they do not have proper...
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'lack'
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...f people will not be developed and they lacks the skill which leads degradation of t...
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...ped and they lacks the skill which leads degradation of their living standard
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, still, then, thus, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75092936803 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49433927024 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542750929368 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0471176782 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3076923077 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149266740038 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623268762813 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632273056955 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972129332629 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066763067881 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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