More companies produce goods in the factories located in different countries other than the location of the head office. Advantages and disadvantages?
Many corporations locate their manufacturing operations in nations outside the countries where their headquarter are situated. This increasingly popular practice brings both benefits and drawbacks for the host countries and for the companies themselves.
One of the primary incentives for companies to establish their manufacturing factories overseas is the affordability of the workforce. Since these establishments are almost placed in poorer nations, where the unemployment rate is high, and the wages are comparatively cheaper, businesses could capitalize on the cheap labor to reduce the overall production costs. From a grander scale, the employment opportunities that foreign firms offer could help to address unemployment, leaving host countries with less burden and people with increased living standard.
However, child labor abuse could be a possible danger engendered by overseas manufacture. Being driven by profits, many are not reluctant to employ school-age children in their factories, and pay a meagre wage for them. By doing so, not only have companies apparently violated labor laws, but also they heavily exploit those who instead go to school to better their future prospects. Issues related payments and working conditions have also been raised around locating factories overseas. Many corporations allegedly skimp on wages, equipment and procedures that are supposed to guarantee a safe workplace. Workers, as a result, jeopardize their health or even their lives for a wage that could barely cover their basic necessities.
In conclusion, despite the economic gains that companies themselves and workers receive from overseas factories, social issues around the mistreatment of labor highlight the need for companies to adjust to be more morally and socially responsible.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 715, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...or a wage that could barely cover their basic necessities. In conclusion, despite the economi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, so, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81509433962 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01127346631 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649056603774 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4086841553 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.416666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108295243344 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406088251708 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422475451067 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731505519929 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305285580996 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.