More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
Discussing when young parents should have babies in their life. Some people consider that spending at least a few years since they married before having babies. In my opinion, I think that having a child in their later age can bring more advantages, not for parents gain but also as youngsters compared to any demerits.
Despite drawback, below, I believed that the benefits gained by having babies in their later age provide with more time to save the knowledge in term of taking care of their child. For example, some research said that nowadays, many young people have children but they don’t have any knowledge to take care of their children. This is often associated with a lack of experience as well as knowledge before having babies. By contrast, having a child late will give them more time to accumulate experience for themselves. Besides, they will have more time to save money as well as mental prepare which help they bring for their children life to become happier.
Admittedly, there are some issues involved when women have a baby late. One problem is that it might impact their health as well as their reproduction health. More research considers that when women above 30 years old especially women who their health is not good leading to the reproduction ability will not stable. This will affect their baby healthy.
In conclusion, young parents should be more time to prepare for their children rather than having a baby early. So that, having a child late have huge benefits compared to any demerits.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, well, at least, for example, i think, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9111969112 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39633695306 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517374517375 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9096191473 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8571428571 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278747008822 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109067681178 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483657165911 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183174273839 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450715315802 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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